so here's short preview of what i sort of expect from my final product. though it should be more dynamic and have more photos and stuff.
nothing much changed from Stage 1, except that i added a poem to the movie, sort of a narration.
and i also animated it to a short clip.
photos used are still stocked photos, since i might change the project after the critique session.
just a note: as mentioned above. most things in the clip are not finalised. this is just to get a feel of what i want and expect to do.
any comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
p.s. just browsed through my post and saw that the video doesn't run smoothly, or maybe it's just my comp. anyway, the transitions should be smooth.
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Your video is cool! Can sense the loneliness. But what about the storyline? Only through the poem? It will get rather wordy though. And may turn off some viewers. Maybe you want to try to cut short on the words?
i think that having the poems are a pretty good idea to deliver your narration. -peiru-
The video didn't seem to run smoothly on the school's computer. Seems stoppy. But the images used were good. i sensed the loneliness.
The poem used was good but a little wordy. maybe you can put less words on one page? How about getting the lines to scroll in the out?
I like your style of arranging the text and photos. It immediately brings us into the lonesome mood.
You mentioned this in your earlier post
'if u can't stand being alone with yourself, wouldn't it mean that you don't love yourself enough?'
Perhaps you can explore into the aspect cuz it adds on to the more melancholy feel? just a suggestion : )
http://my-last-nus-blog.blogspot.com/
opps... sorry bout the previous comment... this is the actual one:
i like your idea of using cropped images in your video.I was thinking maybe it would be better to break up the poems part by part the audience has more time to read it
I think the idea its nice. It allow the audience to focus on the specific subject instead of the whole screen. Giving it a modern feel too. Maybe the words can be lesser too. =)
i think the poem is rather well-written, plus it conveys the lonely vibe pretty well. :)
I think your video focuses more on the text instead of the photo. Not sure if that's okay. Hope to see "unstocked" photos soon. :)
Will every picture have a poem accompanying it? If yes, then I think each screen might have about 2 lines of poem? If not it get rather wordy.
Just my 2 cents worth!
i feel that your texts can be broken up into more scenes.
what sort of music do you intend to use? i think instrumental or jazz will be quite suitable.
Hi all,
thanks for your kind comments.
after going through the vid again, i agree that the poem is too wordy to be read in one shot and may be missed. so most probably each pic will be accompanied by 2 lines of the poem instead.
i might also try to incorporate a slight storyline to the video, but that won't really be the focal point.
@huiting: yup, most prob i'll try to incororate the "being alone with youself" idea. thanks!
as for the photos, they'll be updated during the mid term break or late this week (too many datelines).
and as music choice, most probably it'll be instrumental or jazz, like what jazzy mentioned. but still in the process of sourcing for 1, hopefully i can find it soon.
anyway, a BIG thanks once again for the comments.
Greatly Appreciated.
JoonYong
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